Sterne's Top Tips for Peppier Papers
1. Make sure you do everything the assignment tells you to do. A good portion of the papers for round #1 were graded down for not doing everything on the assignment sheet.
2. Remember that the last 2 questions are just as important as the first -- you should give equal space to all three or weave them together.
3. Don't just tell us, show us: explain your thinking in clear detail. Remember that we can only grade you based upon what you put in your paper.
4. Use specific concepts from lecture and the readings. Directly citing material from lecture and readings will help you connect the ideas in your paper to the ideas we've discussed in class.
5. If you cite stuff, be sure to tell us what it means and how it links up with your argument.
6. Once you have your paper written, look at each paragraph and ask yourself "so what?" Think about why this might matter to someone who's not enrolled in MassComm. Put the answer in as the topic sentence of your paragraph and adjust the rest of the paragraph accordingly.
7. Bring us a draft of your paper. Students who consult with us generally do better.
8. A simple way to proofread your paper: read it out loud to yourself. If a sentence sounds funny, it probably needs to be reworded or rewritten.
9. Put your most important ideas at the top of each paragraph; use the rest of the paragraph to back up your assertion.
10. Remember that fulfilling the minimal requirements for the paper will result in a grade of "B." If you want to go for an "A", you need to go above and beyond the basics of the assignment.
11. If you have fun with this assignment, it's more likely that we'll enjoy reading it.
12. Each of the two options discusses readings and lecture to which you should refer when writing your paper. Be sure to cite these readings and lectures, and relevant ideas, directly. (Option 1: Turner, and the "Who is Represented?" readings and lectures; Option 2: Herman, Bird (assignmed for April 9), and the "Who is Represented?" readings and lectures.) These citations are IN ADDITION TO several other citations of relevant concepts from OTHER readings and lectures which you should add on your own.
13. Use the Writing Center, 501 Cathedral/ English Department, to refine your paper style, especially if you received low marks on the "writing" part of your last paper evaluation. Bring a proof-read draft with you. Call for an appointment a few days in advance: 624-6556.